First Draft Feedback

Positives. 

• Editing was good. The live performance lighting effects was good. 
• Excellent editing and use of mise-en-scene
• Outstanding 
• One of the best, amazing editing. 
• Editing was amazing, so was the lighting. 
• Really strong editing. 
• I love the video, best one I've seen. The shots match the beat of the music, amazing editing. 
• Pacing of the shots ties in well with the visuals. Editing is the best of the year. 
• Amazing editing and shot selection, lip syncing is solid and great performance shots. Hard to find any complaints.

Negatives 

• Repeated shots, could improve party shots. 
• Maybe add an epilepsy warning. 
• Cross media consistency isn't entirely synchronized. 
• Grace is portrayed on her website and digipack as a girly girl and associated with pink and glitter which isn't portrayed in the video. Some shots are repeated, unsure if this was intended. 
• Some of the same shots used twice, lose focus on the drugs and alcohol. 
• A few repeated shots. 
• Too much of a skins influence, not a big problem though. 
• Just a question, why the drugs?
• Skins scene doesn't match the stars image. Too Ellie Goulding. Flashing is not good, couldn't watch more than 30 seconds due to seizures. Trying too hard to be grunge. 
• What's the message? Got drugs and alcohol written all over it. 
• Want to see less of the drugs/woods scenes more. 
• Some of the shots could be better quality (outside). Maybe less drugs and get rid of repeated shots. 
• Repeated shots. 
• Didn't understand what was happening outside of the performance. 

Marks given. 

 38/40

33/40

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38/40

38/40

33/49

36/40

26/40

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30/40