We was all given a task to feedback on each others websites so that we could see what went well and if there is anything we can improve to make it better. This then gives each group a chance to go back to their website and make it the best it can be. Here is the feedback we was given from the other groups:
What went well:
The
website created by the Grace Starr group looks professional,
sleek and contemporary. There are easy-to use links to Media, Press, bio
(About Grace), and Merchandise; the site showcases tour
promotion, photo-shoot, and teaser material for the upcoming
album and music video. The layout is very professional, as is the photography,
which accommodate conventions of Pop.
I love the overall girly look of the website and the layout is really cool. I strongly believe that the website fits the artist's image and genre.
The pictures are well placed and with the same style
the throughout the website it gives off a professional feel.
The background
image, in fact all of them, are strong and clear ones which again shows the
professionalism of the site. The transitions of the site are consistent and
work well. The wide variety merchandise and quality of it is fantastic, as
well as the sign up for newsletters, it shows that real thought has gone into
the designing of the site.
In
conclusion the site itself is fantastic, the quality of images,merchandise and
titles are fantastic, the hard work gone into it, is defiantly
noticeable.
Very
professional, bubbly, pretty. Photos and background look really professional,
looks convincingly like a singer's website, like the colour scheme and text.
Easy to navigate around the website and very informative. I like it.
I liked how
filled and lively the home page was with tour dates, album info, breaking news
and teasers cover it which allows any fans to instantly get what they want from
the website.
Grace Starr's Website is one of the best websites
from the class. There is a good use of colours and i like the way the home page
is not too crowded with lots of information. There is a consistent house style
with the use of fonts and colours. I really like how they have added some news
articles and a teaser trailer. Navigation is easy to use and clearly labelled.
I feel that after reviewing this website
there is very little weaknesses that I can pull out. I feel that they have gone
above and beyond, and put in huge amounts of time to it. They have a great
gallery with all the latest pictures uploaded, along with fine attention to
detail. An example of this is taking pictures of Grace Starr (Charlotte) in the
gym and saying how 'Grace Starr' has been seen in the gym, going down as
section in their Press column. All this and more like teaser music videos makes
the website great. Also the layout they used, has matched their artist.
This website
is very professional and the creator has clearly understood the task at hand.
It is very believable and the group have clearly taken inspiration from similar
artist’s websites. The website is full of content and is very well presented.
All aspects of the website work including links and music buttons. There is
plenty of back story for the star and it will keep the fans informed and also
make the star more relatable.
The Grace Starr website
looks very professional, we are shown different things the artist is doing such
as tour dates, red carpet appearances and interviews. People
interested in the artist want to know and read these sort of things so it is important
to include the on the website for easy access for the audience. We are also
able to purchase thing from the website both merchandise and album download.
Nice
Colour schemes, Look really professional, good consistency across the house
styles on all pages of the website doesn't need a lot of work just a bit of
polishing here and there.
Even Better If:
The menu could be made a little bit bigger, On the
'About Grace' page the pictures would look better re arranged so that the page
finishes where the bottom of the text is. Across all the pages the 'X' next to
the official site title either needs to be made more obvious (made Bigger) or
removed. also the Twitter button on the home page needs re-sizing, looks
a bit lost at the moment.
The Merchandise is not very
appealing and i would not be encouracged to buy anything from it.
To make the site better I think that they could
have links to social media sites on the home screen with icons.
Overall it
is a very well done website it could use a few more photos of the star but
that's about all.
If you did a
gallery of photos in different areas/scenes, etc. The big white space to the
left of everything else on the website gets a bit annoying.
Information
on the 'press' page is all down one side,making the page rather long,possibly
put some of the articles on the opposite side, unless they are down one side
for the purpose of the image being visible. There could be less images on the
'about Grace' as they are already on the 'media' page. The Iphone on the
merchandise page could you possibly remove the small lines around the iPhone?
Spelling
errors should be checked on the 'About Grace' page. Other than that, the
website is flawless.
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